Please read & review these lyrics?

Remembering how my world used to look leaves me sad and lonely. The
memories slowly fade and the Regrets stay and won't let me forget
what dreams meant to me. Sometimes tears fall slow sometimes they
poor. Isn't it a shame that we can't all think the same?

(Chorus)
The sky always looks grey as far as I can tell but I have never been
over the state line. One day I will take myself far away from all the
pain. Have you been pushed around? Have you felt unsatisfied? Have you
been put down? Do you just want to make a good name? Someone has told
me a lie that made me want to hide in a corner and die. Have you ever
done anything you regret? Well I have let my mistakes push me to the
edge.
(Verse)
My vision is blurred from the shining of the blistering sun. It's a
shame that I just can't run away wash all the worries down the
drain. I have taken my life slow now I really need to let things go. I
can tell you that I'm no good at math and I hate class. Maybe that
makes me trapped.
(Chorus)
The sky always looks grey as far as I can tell but I have never been
over the state line. One day I will take myself far away from all the
pain. Have you been pushed around? Have you felt unsatisfied? Have you
been put down? Do you just want to make a good name? Someone has told
me a lie that made me want to hide in a corner and die. Have you ever
done anything you regret? Well I have let my mistakes push me to the
edge.
(Verse)
I look over the ledge and wonder if we're destined for anything at
all. Life went away now I'm here to stay. It's a shame all i can
do is question your mistakes and deny my regrets. I have found in time
that that I shouldn't have let life pass me by.
(Chorus)
The sky always looks grey as far as I can tell but I have never been
over the state line. One day I will take myself far away from all the
pain. Have you been pushed around? Have you felt unsatisfied? Have you
been put down? Do you just want to make a good name? Someone has told
me a lie that made me want to hide in a corner and die. Have you ever
done anything you regret? Well I have let my mistakes push me to the
edge.

Just to let you know it's not a love song and i am 17 and i do suck at
math. I have had family problems the past couple of years i had to
grow up real fast i also had to give a few things up that where
important to me. this is just how i feel i love to write i hope it
don't seem whiny.
Thanks so much for reading!